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join me in paris's avatar

Crazy. One last look into substack, because I couldn’t sleep.. and now I am in the middle of a story and music - and totally awake .. great post

Stories Sown With Hope's avatar

The music is such an integral part of this story! I’m glad I got my headphones and linked into this before I started.

A great use of audio!

And I like the story.

Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

Thank you. The poems were always there. When I found a way to make the music happen it became magical.

Claire Kinton | Ink & Ivy's avatar

I love the unhurried pace of this. It feels as though the music is doing as much of the storytelling as the dialogue. Looking forward to the next chapter. X

Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

Thanks for reading! I am glad that you noticed the connection between the dialogue and the music contributing together to make it stronger.

Good Boy Records's avatar

Nice one, Bill. Keep it up, mate! Great stuff.

Caro Henry's avatar

Like @join me in paris, I too wanted one last quick read and got sucked in. This was another great post, Bill!