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Parker McCoy's avatar

I'm glad Josh's spree of terror is over. Whew. Great post, Bill.

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Incredible tension buildingthroughout the story. The way grief warps Josh's perception until he's convinced the stolen car is his own really captures how obsession distorts reality. I liked how the Billy Joel songs weave through the narrative and amplify the emotional spiral. That moment when he sees the guy at the house hits hard beacuse by then we understand there's no turning back for Josh.

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