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Hassania's avatar

I loved it!!! Reminded me of the same kind of beautiful prose and special connection between the characters in Her Lover (Belle du Seigneur) by Albert Cohen

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Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

Thank you for your comment. I like the connections you have made.

I have never read that book but will look for it.

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Hassania's avatar

Read the opening pages of the book (available for free online) and you’ll see! Can’t wait to hear what you think.

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Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

I see what you are saying! The juxtaposition of ideas that move quickly from beginning to end of the second paragraph of Her Lover (Belle du Seigneur) by Albert Cohen and my writing are strikingly similar in their usage. I love how there are connections when we don't even know they exist when we write something.

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Hassania's avatar

I agree, that is so interesting! Your pacing is really powerful, I can’t wait to read more of your work ☺️

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